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Waaahhh I've started the story

So this is the first part of the whole thing, Chapter 1. The story is written by :iconkookiekat4: with my help of course :> Thank you Kookie! thats my name for you..you shall like that name D:

This isn't some comic though, its more of a visual thingamajig.or whatever it is...

Chapter 1:
One bright Sunday morning in Minora Town, Daniel lay sleeping in his bed. At exactly 9:00am, as if a slilent alarm woke him, he darted his eyes open, got dressed and ran downstairs where his mother and father waited for him.

"How many pancakes?" Daniel's mom always made pancakes for his birthday, pancakes were his favourite food, But of course, you can't have pancakes at any time of the day.

"Just 3, I don't want to get to filled up. I'll be walking alot now that I'll be exploring the rest of the Zodi Region!" Daniel couldn't hide the excitement for his new journey.
"Oh right, your starting your Pokemon journey today."
Daniel's father said wihtout looking up from his newspaper. "That's why I figured you'd get tired plain walking everywhere. Why don't you come with me to the garage Daniel?" Daniel followed his father, eager to see what he was just blabbering about.

"How bout this for transportation?" Daniel's father unveiled a shiny red bike, with jet black gears to match the handles.
Daniel was speachless, the only thing he had to say was,
"Is mom gonna make me wear a helemt?"
His dad smiled as he ruffled his hair, then they both walked inside to finish breakfast.

As soon as Daniel finished breakfast, he grabbed his new bike and immediately sped off toward Majora City where he would meet his idol Proffesor Myrtle who would present him with his first Pokemon. Proffesor Myrtle was the top girl of Zodi Region, though there were other proffessors for each district of Zodi, she was the one who everyone looked up to, without her, some Pokemon wouldn't even be known. Daniel was amazed by her smarts, and even her looks.
He arrived around 10:15am and as he looked up at the laboratory where he would meet his idol, he thought about his future and how it would turn out...

Not wanting to be anymore curious, he stepped inside the large building where he was greeted by an assistant lab worker.

"Good morning young man, if you wish to see Proffesor Myrtle she is in the room down the hallway third left." And wish that the lab assistant went back to work.

Daniel walked down the hallway holding the urge to dash down the hallway and meet the Proffesor. He was looking at the walls coverd in a light blue paint and full of pictures of Pokemon big and small, he couldn't name all of them but from studying he could name a few.

He reached the door that the Lab Assistant said Myrtle would be in. He began to reach for the knob when he stopped and remembered his manners. He then knocked, and waited for a reply. He heared of couple voices from inside, both girls, then he heard a voice from the older woman, "Come in! it's open!"

He stepped inside to find his idol Proffesor Myrtle, with her hair to the side and a clipboard in her hands. She was standing next to another girl with a white and pink hoodie and a yellow bag on her back.

"Oh good morning young man. Who might you be?" Myrtle said, looking at Daniel with a friendly smile.
Daniel nearly choked on his tongue trying to speak, he didn't think about how nervous he'd be meeting the proffesor he looked up to all his life...

"Uh, I'm uh.. Daniel... Daniel Bleu" He tried to gather more confidence as he spoke. "I'm here to start my Pokemon journey. I've been waiting for years and today I turn 14 and am now legal to become a Pokemon Trainer"
"Oh really now?" The girl standing next to Myrtle spoke, "Today I turn 14 too!"
Daniel's eyes widened in enjoyment, maybe he wouldn't have to do all of this alone, he wasn't the only newcomer to the Pokemon world.

"I'm sorry I haven't introduced my sister" Proffesor Myrtle proceeded to walk her sister over to Daniel. "This is my younger sister Hazel, she came to me to help her start her journey to become a great Pokemon Trainer, which seems to be what you've come to me for also, Daniel."
Daniel could only nod his head, he nearly melted while his idol spoke to him. Then he could finally speak,
"Nice to meet you Hazel" He held out his hand to greet her.
"Same as well!" Hazel ignored the hand shake and gave him a friendly hug.

Daniel blushed, not just because of the hug but also cause he did think Hazel was kinda pretty.

"Well, now that we're all introduced, you two can follow me into the Starter Lab."
Proffesor Myrtle led them into a large room that seemed to be a library of many books about pokemon and all the information you need to know about them and how to start a pokemon journey.

"Here is where you will pick your first Pokemon. Now let me state, your first Pokemon will now only be the one who has been with you more than any other, your first Pokemon will also become your best friend."

Myrlte walked them up to a desk sitting below what seemed to be a large computer screen. Hazel walked up first to the desk. Along the desk were three pokeballs.
"How do we know what pokemon we're picking? It's not like these pokeballs are transparent..." Hazel was confused...
"Well Haz, that's where our Pokemon Identifyer comes in" Myrtle picked up the first pokeball and put it in a glass box next to the desk. She clicked a button on the side of the box and then a loud buzz occurred that seemed to come from the screen. Hazel and Daniel looked up at the screen to see a pokemon had popped up next to some information. Then a computer's voice began to talk:
"Aquippo. A water type pokemon,
Its poor leg structure prevents it from moving too much. Despite standing on all fours, it rather sits."
"He looks absolutley adorable!!!" Hazel was already in love with him. Myrtle took the pokeball from the glass case and put it in Hazel's hands. Hazel couldn't believe she was actually holding her first pokemon!

"Ok... My turn" Daniel was next, as he walked up to the desk, he thought about what type he wanted to start with.
"Uuum, let's try this one" Daniel pointed to the one at the other end of what Hazel chose. Again, Myrtle picked up the pokeball and put it in the glass case, pressed the button and they waited for the computer's voice to come on again.
"Aven. A grass type pokemon, it stays most of its time above and rarely has communication from other fakemons."
"Well on our adventure Aquippo and Aven with deffinatley have comunication! They'll be best friends!" Hazel was excited to begin the journey already.

"He's cute, and looks like my kind of pokemon, I think he's the one!" Daniel waited as Proffesor Myrtle took the pokeball back out of the glass case and put it in his hands.
After a little chat and goodbyes, Daniel and Hazel left the Lab ready to begin a new journey they've both waited for their whole lives.

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Chapter 2 is already written and finished. its my turn to make graphics out of it :3
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Midnitez-REMIX's avatar
I think it would be better in a written document and the image used as a preview image. It wouldn't shrink the image I don't think and it would clear a lot of space in the description box.